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24 January 2016 @ 11:52 am
Er... hi! I am super new to LJ and stuff so...
Anyway, I wrote this super mini drabble for a holiday writing challenge and it's really bad but whatever.
Corrections welcome!

Fandom: Hetalia
Paring: LietPol

Il suo amico è ricoperto totalmente di tinta. Bianca e rossa, azzurra, verde, nera - la tinta è alla dita e alla faccia e agli vestiti e agli capelli.
“Vieni e guarda, Licia! È bellissima, no?”
“Sei sudicio,” Lituania dice. “Che cosa facevi?”
“Pitturavo il muro. Gli guarda!”
Guarda. Il muro è non più bianco. La bandiera di Polonia con una aquila; Lituania sospira e sorride.
“Sei molto vanesio, Pol!”
Gli occhi verde di Polonia sono calmi. “Lo so,” dice casualmente. “Comunque– adesso, non mi dimenticheranno nessuno, no?”
“Io non ti dimenticherei mai,” Lituania dice senza riflettere, e Polonia ride.
“Lo so.”

His friend is completely covered in paint. White and red, light blue, green, black - the paint is on his fingers and on his face and on his clothes and in his hair.
"Come and see, Liet! It's beautiful, huh?"
"You're filthy," Lithuania says. "What were you doing?"
"I painted the wall. Look at it!"
He looks. The wall is no longer white. The flag of Poland, with an eagle; Lithuania sighs and smiles.
"You're very vain, Pol!"
Poland's green eyes are calm. "I know," he says casually. "Anyway-- now, no one will forget me, right?"
"I would never forget you," Lithuania says without thinking, and Poland laughs.
"I know."
ringlat: he said ringlat on January 24th, 2016 06:54 pm (UTC)
i didn't expect anyone to join!
♥︎ HI!!!! !!! !! ♥︎

Sorry about the layout, I'm literally fixing it right now! Then I'll come back and read your post for real. *wishes I had a fitting icon*
ringlat: a dreamringlat on January 24th, 2016 09:27 pm (UTC)
Now I'm back!!
Whew, it took longer to edit things than I thought. There's still a few things left I should fix but I'm not sure I can be bothered! I haven't ever studied Italian so I can only pick out a few words. At least I know "muro"!

"You're filthy," Lithuania says. "What were you doing?"

I can definitely imagine these words being exchanged... If you need any ideas, I think it's time to write a sequel where Poland's actually laughing because he did something MUCH worse elsewhere that Lithuania REALLY won't be able to forget (or get rid of).
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